I left some parts out of the story because I didn't think they were worth mentioning or couldn't remember enough about them to get a chapter out of them. Here's two things you missed!
SCENE 1During that chapter where I had us get back to Penn Station by rewinding a previous chapter, I mentioned that it had also rained. But rain is not all that happened! WHOOOOA!
SCENE 2I forget at which point this next scene happened, it might have been on the same walk as the Goth Store one.

That's all I can remember, but I think there was at least one more interesting thing... I guess that'll be another post if I ever remember it!